Talk:Increased music appreciation: Difference between revisions
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Re: "Increased music appreciation can be described as an increased enjoyment of music" - I propose finding a synonym for the second use of "increased", purely for stylistic reasons. It would make better reading. I suggest "heightened" perhaps? --[[User:Corax|Corax]] ([[User talk:Corax|talk]]) 13:27, 11 December 2017 (CET) | Re: "Increased music appreciation can be described as an increased enjoyment of music" - I propose finding a synonym for the second use of "increased", purely for stylistic reasons. It would make better reading. I suggest "heightened" perhaps? --[[User:Corax|Corax]] ([[User talk:Corax|talk]]) 13:27, 11 December 2017 (CET) | ||
increased is just fine, dude --[[User:Josikins|Josikins]] ([[User talk:Josikins|talk]]) 19:53, 17 December 2017 (CET) |