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 **At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as translucent and blurry.
 *needs rephrasing
-'''"At first, it may require the concentration of the host or tulpa to maintain the visible hallucination, however, it seems to become second-nature or automatic with time."'''
-*when "however" is in the middle of two independent clauses, you need a semicolon before "however" and a comma after it.
-*At first, it may require the concentration of the host or tulpa to maintain the visible hallucination; however, it seems to become second nature or automatic with time.
-*second nature isn't hyphenated. to check if a word is, you consult google.
 ==Tactile==