User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions

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 *the host's ability = the ability of the host = possessive = use apostrophe
 *their tulpa's visual form = tulpa's form = form of tulpa = possessive = use apostrophe
-'''"A young tulpa may rely more on its host to actively focus on their form to be seen, however a more developed tulpa can impose themselves without any conscious thought or attention from the host."'''
-*if "however" is between two independent clauses, you need a semicolon before however and a comma after it.
-*A young tulpa may rely more on its host to actively focus on their form to be seen; however, a more developed tulpa can impose themselves without any conscious thought or attention from the host.
 '''"At the early stages, it may be hard for one to visualize a stable form mentally, it may lack detail or flicker and fragment."'''