User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions

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**"...which lack substance, i.e., the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch."
**"...which lack substance, i.e., the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch."
**"...which lack substance (i.e. the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch)."
**"...which lack substance (i.e. the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch)."
'''"Complete realism has not been reported, however as the tulpamancers brain becomes acclimated with interacting with the tulpa physically, it will assign increasing physical realism and substance towards the tactile sensations."'''
*there are two independent clauses between "however" therefore you need a semicolon before "however" and a comma after it.
*tulpamancer's brain = brain of tulpamancer = possessive = apostrophe
*Complete realism has not been reported; however, as the tulpamancer's brain becomes acclimated with interacting with the tulpa physically, it will assign increasing physical realism and substance towards the tactile sensations.