User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions

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**this is an incomplete sentence. it does not have a verb or make sense by itself
**this is an incomplete sentence. it does not have a verb or make sense by itself
*change it to full sentence with subject + verb + elements which allow it to make sense by itself
*change it to full sentence with subject + verb + elements which allow it to make sense by itself
"i'm just going to delete this shit though because it is not needed
fuck it. i'm just going to delete this shit though because it is not needed
 
'''"Tactile sensations such as texture, temperature, material, and weight are perceptible as diminished ''facsimiles'' drawn from memory to the actual physical tactile sensations they represent."'''
 
*facsimiles: use simpler words to increase readability
*i looked on google and other words that are synonymous with this word and would be more well-known to the readers of PW include: copies, replications, reproductions, and duplicates
*"copies" sounds best and is simple and effective
*"facsimiles" generally means a copy of written or printed material like books etc anyways so it's not exactly the most accurate term to use