User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions
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**this is an incomplete sentence. it does not have a verb or make sense by itself | **this is an incomplete sentence. it does not have a verb or make sense by itself | ||
*change it to full sentence with subject + verb + elements which allow it to make sense by itself | *change it to full sentence with subject + verb + elements which allow it to make sense by itself | ||
fuck it. i'm just going to delete this shit though because it is not needed | |||
'''"Tactile sensations such as texture, temperature, material, and weight are perceptible as diminished ''facsimiles'' drawn from memory to the actual physical tactile sensations they represent."''' | |||
*facsimiles: use simpler words to increase readability | |||
*i looked on google and other words that are synonymous with this word and would be more well-known to the readers of PW include: copies, replications, reproductions, and duplicates | |||
*"copies" sounds best and is simple and effective | |||
*"facsimiles" generally means a copy of written or printed material like books etc anyways so it's not exactly the most accurate term to use |