User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions
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**we only use "or" once in a series of lists to prevent redundancy | **we only use "or" once in a series of lists to prevent redundancy | ||
**tulpa's skin, clothes, or otherwise | **tulpa's skin, clothes, or otherwise | ||
==Tactile gradient== | |||
'''Accurate tactile sensation lacking form density/substance''' - '''"phantom sensations" or "touched by a ghost" type experience.''' | |||
*"phantom sensations" or "touched by a ghost" type experience. | |||
**this is an incomplete sentence. it does not have a verb or make sense by itself | |||
*change it to full sentence with subject + verb + elements which allow it to make sense by itself | |||
"i'm just going to delete this shit though because it is not needed |