User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions

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**we only use "or" once in a series of lists to prevent redundancy
**we only use "or" once in a series of lists to prevent redundancy
**tulpa's skin, clothes, or otherwise
**tulpa's skin, clothes, or otherwise
==Tactile gradient==
'''Accurate tactile sensation lacking form density/substance''' - '''"phantom sensations" or "touched by a ghost" type experience.'''
*"phantom sensations" or "touched by a ghost" type experience.
**this is an incomplete sentence. it does not have a verb or make sense by itself
*change it to full sentence with subject + verb + elements which allow it to make sense by itself
"i'm just going to delete this shit though because it is not needed