User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions
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**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as translucent and blurry. | **At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as translucent and blurry. | ||
*needs rephrasing | *needs rephrasing | ||
'''"At first, it may require the concentration of the host or tulpa to maintain the visible hallucination, however, it seems to become second-nature or automatic with time."''' | |||
*when "however" is in the middle of two independent clauses, you need a semicolon before "however" and a comma after it. | |||
*At first, it may require the concentration of the host or tulpa to maintain the visible hallucination; however, it seems to become second nature or automatic with time. | |||
*second nature isn't hyphenated. to check if a word is, you consult google. |