User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions

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*needs rephrasing, too confusing
*needs rephrasing, too confusing
'''"At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as a darkened shade imposed on your vision, a localized visual distortion, or translucent and blurry."'''
here's how it reads grammatically:
**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as a darkened shade imposed on your vision
**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as a localized visual distortion
**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as translucent and blurry.
*needs rephrasing