User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions
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*needs rephrasing, too confusing | *needs rephrasing, too confusing | ||
'''"At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as a darkened shade imposed on your vision, a localized visual distortion, or translucent and blurry."''' | |||
here's how it reads grammatically: | |||
**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as a darkened shade imposed on your vision | |||
**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as a localized visual distortion | |||
**At first, a tulpa's visible form may start as simple as translucent and blurry. | |||
*needs rephrasing |