User:Oskykins/Tulpa grammar: Difference between revisions

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*do the last two sentences make sense to you? not as clearly as it should.
*do the last two sentences make sense to you? not as clearly as it should.
*needs rephrasing
*to fix, i have replaced "be on" with "involve"


'''"There are several conditions and practices which can facilitate ''communication that are useful'' while initially developing this ability."'''
'''"There are several conditions and practices which can facilitate ''communication that are useful'' while initially developing this ability."'''