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*another grammatically incorrect attempt at combining two independent clauses | *another grammatically incorrect attempt at combining two independent clauses | ||
*split the two independent clauses into two sentences | *split the two independent clauses into two sentences | ||
'''"This conversational engagement can be on any topic, the events of the day, abstract ideas and beliefs, reading aloud, story telling, and so forth."''' | |||
*you have phrased the sentence grammatically like this: | |||
**This conversational engagement can be on any topic | |||
**This conversational engagement can be on the events of the day | |||
**This conversational engagement can be on abstract ideas and beliefs | |||
**This conversational engagement can be on reading aloud | |||
**This conversational engagement can be on story telling | |||
*do the last two sentences make sense to you? not as clearly as it should. | |||
*needs rephrasing | |||