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*visual section needs more info and instructions on how to visualize and eventually hallucinate tulpa.

==Introduction==

'''"The modern ''iteration'' of the phenomenon generally approaches the concept differently, treating tulpas as permanent every-day companions, created to accompany hosts in their daily life."'''

'''"The modern iteration of the phenomenon generally approaches the concept differently, treating tulpas as permanent every-day companions, created to accompany hosts in their daily life."'''

*iteration: use simpler words that most English speaking readers will understand to increase readability for PW audience

*every-day: this word does not have a hyphen. it's either "everyday" or "every day" depending on specific rules:

**"everyday" is an adjective (describes a noun) used to describe things that (1) occur every day, or (2) are ordinary or commonplace.

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**"...which lack substance, i.e., the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch."

**"...which lack substance (i.e. the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch)."

'''"Fleeting sensation as the result of certain perceived tactile stimuli''' - '''''Dissociation from physical senses.''"'''

*this is an incomplete sentence that needs a verb

*passing out now, will return later

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+*visual section needs more info and instructions on how to visualize and eventually hallucinate tulpa.
 ==Introduction==
-'''"The modern ''iteration'' of the phenomenon generally approaches the concept differently, treating tulpas as permanent every-day companions, created to accompany hosts in their daily life."'''
+'''"The modern iteration of the phenomenon generally approaches the concept differently, treating tulpas as permanent every-day companions, created to accompany hosts in their daily life."'''
-*iteration: use simpler words that most English speaking readers will understand to increase readability for PW audience
 *every-day: this word does not have a hyphen. it's either "everyday" or "every day" depending on specific rules:
 **"everyday" is an adjective (describes a noun) used to describe things that (1) occur every day, or (2) are ordinary or commonplace.
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 **"...which lack substance, i.e., the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch."
 **"...which lack substance (i.e. the tulpa's form would not feel solid to the touch)."
+'''"Fleeting sensation as the result of certain perceived tactile stimuli''' - '''''Dissociation from physical senses.''"'''
+*this is an incomplete sentence that needs a verb
+*passing out now, will return later